mixed feelings. I think there’s potential here, but the script currently feels fan-ficy and not super developed. needs a good editor to give it a clean look over. might be worth something but definitely not at its best form yet.

acting was good. the lead actress was the standout but nothing wrong with her supporting players. made some iffy dialogue better.

design was quite developed for a fringe show. good set, and surprisingly developed lighting for a fringe show I was very impressed by it. sound was good too. only design complaint (more directing) is that I really don’t like seeing stage hands onstage and a lot of their appearances were not necessary.

decent bones but still not super great. all is not lost though.