Opening as a fun comedic show where the left and right brain are in conflict (full of audience interaction), the fractured nature of the brain and duelling genres did not work for me. The stylistic and writing choices of the repetitive interjections resulted in me zoning out instead of on the edge of my seat to see what came next. Using text that changed while in the fractured state could have fixed the issue, and kept the audience entertained. While the concept is strong, the execution could do with some revisions for creating a more cohesive show.